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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 12:12 PM Title: intro 2

Have you read the "Writing Tools" section of giantess world? It there for aspiring authors such as yourself. It's a good idea because I noticed you don't have any speech marks to define the speech of the characters. I don't want to sound harsh because I believe you have a good idea, you just need to organize you ideas better.



Author's Response:

I did not read the "writing tools" part of the site yet, but now I have started to read them. Thanks for the tip's. I don't think your harsh at all, becuase I know that I need inprovment.

 

Thank's again for your feed back and I will be trying to organize myself better. I am good at organizing my thing's, math, chess and so on, but writing is not yet one of them. I hopping it will be one day. As lest I don't seem to lack good idea's, so that's a start.

Sorry for any misspellings in advance, becuase I am a bit tried. That and well it's my weakest point subject in school.     

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