Date: October 20 2018 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
ps. Upon seeing your note in the last chapter end note, I now rescind my earlier statements about people telling what stories to work on lol
Author's Response:
I forgot that was there, too, since this story is one of my older ones.
Date: June 06 2013 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Excelent work, man! I hope to see more of these adventures!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Love this story and series, as for the next story to be finished I would love to see Julia finished. I love you violent and sadistic stories. Cannot wait for the next installment. PS: I love these characters too.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Julia is definitely still definitely going, although I'll be honest and say the distance I still have to go before the end is intimidating and is the main reason why I haven't been adding much to it. It will be continued eventually though. Thanks again!
Date: February 27 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Love this story and series, as for the next story to be finished I would love to see Julia finished. I love you violent and sadistic stories. Cannot wait for the next installment. PS: I love these characters too.
Date: January 16 2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Can you bring Janie and Scott back? I loved that idea? Can you please try and write a story that has them, also great worm
Author's Response:
thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed. i hadn't really planned on giving Janie and Scott a standalone thing, although I guess I'd consider it if there was interest
Date: December 26 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Love this story, love the series, as it's my favorite out of all of yours. Please keep up the fantastic work, as we are all reading!
Author's Response:
thanks, i'm glad you enjoy the series so much. it'll be back eventually
Date: December 12 2012 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
This was one of the best stories I've ever read! Your character are very nice as the plot. So, please, don`t stop writing!
Author's Response:
thanks very much. i don't intend to stop writing as long as there's interest in these stories
Date: December 10 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Good stuff, would have liked to see the next 2 days played out but I get what you were doing there. As always, you invent great characters, hope to see them all in future installments.
As for which story that gets continued, either Toy Teacher or Freshman, I love F/f interaction so I'd love to see more of Toy Teacher and Freshamn has a great story line going, he desperately wants to belong despite the danger it exposes him too. Plus there is a bad girl in that story that I'd love to see more interaction between him and her, the girl from his art class. I'd be happy seeing either of those stories continued.
Author's Response:
thanks. i have some fun F/f planned for toy teacher and i do plan on having further intereaction with that mischievous girl in freshman
Date: December 09 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Toy teacher
Author's Response:
i will take it under consideration
Date: December 09 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 9: Edge of Reason
Another great addition to the Mommy's Time-out series. I liked this a lot and had no problem with the ages of the characters that others seemed to have. I've read stories with far younger kids dominating their shrunken siblings.
I won't comment on your ability to write as I have done so in the past and it is always spot on. Your characters seem alive and real throughout. And the reader can generally identify with poor Scott and all the Hell he goes through in these shorts- pardon the pun. I look forward to more Maggie in future episodes, as well as Ella (?) his girlfriend, and his mother of course. I know that most here probably do not like M/m but i would like to see some time with the brother too.
Whatever you do, I'll read it.
As to your longer series, I was enjoying Toy Teacher the most and would like to see more of that, preferably w/ some more F/f interaction.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
thank you much for your review. Ella will appear in the next episode, as will Maggie and his mother. for a while, I actually considered including his brother somehow in the story, but M/m is just not really my cup of tea, so I don't think I could do it justice. I'd be open to some M/f content however at some point if there is reader interest.
I have some tidbits already written for Toy Teacher that includes a lot of F/f interaction, so you're in luck there. thanks for reading.