Date: September 10 2018 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
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Date: August 20 2013 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Hello Jacksmith,
I really love reading your stories but I'm not really a mom-related fan. I loved this story though but there's one part in this story that I feel is missing. I know you've been harassed by some guys here and that made you stop this story leaving it very short. I think it is just fine if the whole week of bootcamp only lasts this long, eventhough it leaves me really disappointed.
But there's a part I feel would be cool to be filled as it feels kinda empty - I'm talking about the part where you write that Scott has been handed down to his sisters a few times when his mother had to go out in flip-flops, leaving him at the mercy of his sister. I think this story would be really complete once you've explained how and when was the first time Scott got struck by the fact he was going to be his sister's property for the first time.
I hope my requests are not too much to ask, you don't have to continue/complete this story if you don't feel like it, but that would be really awesome if you did and I would appreciate ;)
Love to read your stories !
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I see where you're coming from in wanting to see that particular part of Scott's life played out. I skimmed over that in the timeline for a couple reasons: 1, to avoid further discomfort from the community using such a young character as Scott's sister like in this story, and 2, I've already written several separate stories involving a little sister taking control of her brother, so my intention in this series was to focus on other characters relationships and directions.
In the 3rd story of this series, I do show the actual first encounter between the shrunken Scott and his sister, though she hasn't actually been given full ownership of him at the time. It's just tricky business writing such young characters, with the potential for community backlash. I just try to write what the greatest number of people will find acceptable. However, I appreciate your interest; if you like the relationship of Scott to his sister, she'll make appearances in later installments of this series.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
how does scott NOT think of running away?
[Report This]Date: February 18 2013 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Final review.
2 thoughts.
1. I like the... Set up of the stories. Fun reads, ever last one of them.
2. Looking forward to story 5 of this and 'A Little Blackmail.'
Author's Response: I've appreciated hearing your thoughts in your kind reviews, it's always a treat for me to hear people have enjoyed these little fantasies, even long after they were completed. Set-up is always important to me for believability issues and I always put a good deal of thought into it, so thanks. The fifth entries of both this and ALB will show up at some point, and I look forward to hearing what you think.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Don't know why I waited to read this. Maybe because I've been too busy. Anyway, here's my review.
Not much to criticise I guess. Another fantastic story to this series. I'm all up for spin offs of Janie and Scott mostly, but can agree with most other people for the next story. I read that in story 5, Maggie, his mom, and Ella were going to be characters. I guess that would be straight up for F/f? If still F/m then still very interesting to see where you take it with Ella.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review/rating. it's still going to be F/m in the next one. i've got what i think are some pretty fun ideas for Ella
Date: December 10 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
I think you should do julia, then toy teacher. Julia, to me, is genius, and I love it. It's cool thinking someone my age would do the things she does (even if she's fake). Thanks for the great stories!
Author's Response:
thanks much, i'm glad you enjoy it. i will take it under consideration
Date: December 09 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Really enjoying this one, sad to hear there is only one more chapter. Any plans to keep going with Julia soon?
Author's Response:
i might; i'd like to get a sense of what people want to see continued most: julia, toy teacher, or freshman
[Report This]Date: December 08 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
wht time frame is this for him past or present? Cause I know its changes in this story. Is this the summer before he escapes his familys prison?
Author's Response:
yes, this is the summer before he leaves for college
Date: December 05 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
I was honestly unaware that I was downgrading you. I have been posting from a source other than my desktop, so there is a possibility that I'm not seeing everything. I have seen #8 as the hightest on my phone. This is my faul if I screwed up. I'll cease posting point scores until I am back in my home and can see everything.
Author's Response:
fair enough. and again i do see where you're coming from on the point you made. i'm pretty sure the next story, which will do sort of what Blackmail 3 did by jumping forward some years, will put your concerns to rest
[Report This]Date: December 05 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Just so that there's no misunderstanding, I have always apprciated your work here. I think you are immensely talented and this place is exponentially better with your contributions. Your sibling/mother/son stories are phenomenal and need to continue on! I may annoy some here, but find incest-themed gts stories, particularly those that included foot domination, awesome. The intimacly of the relationships make the femdom stuff all the more cruel and humiliating. Again, my only "complaint" is that it's difficult for me to erotically enjoy stories that use characters that are only 1-2 years above twelve years of age. If this site was just for sci-fi stories that happened to include a giantess 13-14 year old, that's cool. The hangup me and a few others have (and it's not a condemnation) is to include femdom-stuff featuring a youngster on a site that is fetish-origented. To be blunt, folks flap it to the stories here. Personally, I enjoyed Parts 2-3 of A Little Blackmail much more than the opening chapter due to Carly's age. However, don't beat yourself up or anything. You know my intention and where I'm coming from, so keep up your great work. I also hope the next part of this tale eventually includes Judy really using her pungent feet to crush his self-worth!
Author's Response:
valid points; i'm perfectly aware of what this site means to many people. at the same time, i will point out that you've already taken a look at the story in the earlier chapters and decided the subject matter was not for you, so i suppose i'm not entirely sure why you're giving it a lower rating again when you were already aware it was not a subject you agree with because of the ages. again though i will respect your opinion. the next story in this series will do sort of what Blackmail 3 did and jump forward far enough that hopefully most people's issues with age will be quelled
[Report This]Date: December 05 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
I hadnt read this series until just the past few days when i got current on everything . I have to say its pretty enjoyable and just what i would expect from you and your normally high level of fiction writing.
As for the story not being popular, it seems quite the opposite to me. The other point brought up was the age. There seems to be a vocal minority who comment about age of characters. As i see those comments from time to time but it doesnt seem to actually effect readership or popularity.
Either way this story is a good read, Im personally hoping for another blackmail story to see what happened to carly or another toy teacher chapter after you finish this.
Author's Response:
thanks for sharing, asuka; i'm glad you've enjoyed the stories of this little series. more than likely, i'd contribute something to toy teacher before putting out the next blackmail story, as part of me feels like i ought to complete one of the several stories i have unfinished before moving on, but it mostly depends on responses i get
[Report This]Date: December 04 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Sorry, for got to leave a rating...
Date: December 04 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
This is definently becoming interseting! Its a fun read :)
I can't help but feel a strong connection to the ALB series.
What do you plan on working on after this short story is done?
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing! the ALB connection is definitely there since it's a gts scenario i really enjoy, but hopefully i've made it different enough to be distinguished. my plan is to add more to either Freshman, Julia, or Toy Teacher, depending on where the interest is.
Date: December 03 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
So this issue is coming more and more frequently as I get older. When I first started writing, I was 14, and when I first started reading, I was 12 or 13. Gradually, I realized that my characters, who were aged according to my current age, were not getting any older as I aged. Soon, the question of approrpiatness started coming to mind.
What I decided was that there is a limit. As long as this is a sibling relationship, and the siblings are of a certain distance, and that neither side is getting any real sexual enjoyment out of it - then it's okay. If Carly, for example, was 13 and doing the things she did in A Little Blackmail 3, then there would be a problem.
Currently, I find this cute in a playful type of way, and though this IS fetish material (mostly stuff I don't have to worry about as I just turned 18) then it's okay as long as there is a threshhold.
I know the reason you chose this age is that there are certain immaturities that allow for scenarios that just won't fly when the character is 20-something. By that point, a girl wouldn't TEASE under her feet, there would be something... Else, in there.
However, in the interests of the masses (no pun intended,) perhaps you should increase the future ages of your characters. You don't HAVE to, but just realize that you're alienating a few people who might feel uncomfortable as they get older.
Author's Response:
I understand exactly what you're getting at. My situation of reading/writing stories over time mirrors yours pretty closely. I wanted the immaturity of the character that simply wouldn't work in a character in their twenties without making it overtly sexual. You are correct in that this story is going much less for sexualization despite the obvious fetish overtones, and instead is meant to come off in that playful almost-but-not-quite-provocative way, but there are still people who prefer not to have to mentally separate it. In my future stuff, the characters are definitely going to be older, or at least in a range more acceptable to everyone. Thanks for your thoughts.
[Report This]Date: December 01 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
People seem to be forgetting that the stories on here are fiction.
Please continue to write about the themes that interest you without worry to the sensibilities of others, there are plenty of other things written/drawn/etc every day that will appeal to every taste.
Really great story as usual. I love how the sister acts at the end of chapter 2.
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing. i'm glad you got what i was going for. certainly, i'm aware that this is tricky ground i'm treading on here, so i try to make sure what i write won't offend anyone, but sometimes it can't be helped i guess.
Date: November 30 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
punishment time!
Date: November 29 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Great opening Jack. If I recall, you're not a fan of insertion anyway so as long as you don't go there, I don't see that there should be a problem. I can't get into mom/son stories so I'd actually like to see the sister get a chance at the shrinkees.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. you are correct; there will be no insertion to be found in this story. hope you like the upcoming chapters
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
i like this alot an want to see where it goes next
[Report This]Date: November 29 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
You know how much I enjoy and appreciate your story-telling skills. Everything you've contributed is excellent and fun as hell to read. With that said, please don't take this the wrong way. And, I realize that this may have been brought up before, but this particular story is among my favorites, and I wanted to share my thoughts. Your style is great, as are the characterizations. However, I really wish the sister was at least 16-18. I obviously find it arousing to imagine a tiny person (in this case brother) being subjected to the pungent feet of their mother and/or sister. And while it's the act itself that ia paramount, I also use my imagination to "see" these characters. I don't like conjuring up a 13 year old as an active character. I really find it difficult to find as much joy in reading about a near adolencent acting as cruel tormentress. I'm in no way impugning your character or anything. Rather, I'm offering some advice as to how to keep the vast majority of readers engaged on the action. Thirteen is just too young no matter how you slice it on a fetish site. It just doesn't work, but that may just be me. Thanks for continuing this awesome series, though!
Author's Response:
I can respect your opinion. Mainly, though, I think of it more like this. Personally, when I read a story, I sort of mentally put myself into the mind of the character and not just myself. I certainly wouldn't want to read one of these kinds of stories about someone in, say, their mid-thirties getting involved in fetish material with a teen. By doing it this way, I'm emphasizing the relationship of a couple of teenagers, not an adult and a teen. Additionally, there's not going to be any overt sex/incest going on here, and, while I'm certainly not comparing my story to these guys, some of the top stories on this site like homunculus or christmas eve at my cousin's feet have involved characters near this age or even younger, in the case of the first one, and that was ok because they integrated the characters in such a way to make them the instigators of the psychological elements, not just sex objects. The story after this will probably return to Scott's mom again, but for now, unless i get a flood of other complaints, i'll probably stick with this.
Date: November 29 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Pushing Luck (and Probably Daisies)
Jack... Smith... 5996...
This looks very promising. And please, please, please, make it so this is absolutely not the final round!
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing. i enjoy these characters a lot, so unless this story gets a boatload of complaints, i'm probably continuing