Date: April 21 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
First off I apologize for whoever rudely commented last time to make you stop. This story is really amazing, I love Skylar so far and the older sister could be interesting. This story has a lot of potential. I’m not too crazy over feet, but for the beginning of a story its ok, I hope it escalates more. I can't wait for more, I hope you will continue!
Date: April 20 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jake, Obviously whomever tried to 'break-you-down' must have a lot of bigger problems! Don't let anyone stop you from exspressing yourself. Maybe they just thought that they would mess with your head? They should be looking into their own fantasy, and trying to figure it out, ( But, I wouldn't want to know what their sic fantasy was? Would you?) Ha, ha, ha, ...
Keep writing dude! Don't let some goof mess with ya!