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Reviewer: yank Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2006 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

fantastic. keep it goin

Author's Response: Awesome, thank you for the review. I think I might add on to it. Later

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 18 2006 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty interesting story, you've got here...If you don't mind at all, can you make a sequel? I really want to know what happens next....

Author's Response: I will see what I can do, maybe just add another big chapter or something. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 17 2006 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

interesting start, i really like what you have started here. You have alot of possible routes to take with this.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, I might add to this this story. Later

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