Date: May 16 2014 1:30 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
I like the premise. toying with them and turning them them into game pieces for their amusement
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 1:51 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
I agree with everyone's sentiments on your excellent writing and sense of narration. I am intrigued by the setup and hope you are able to continue this story. Given your tags, I am also interested in seeing what you plan in terms of the violent/sadistic sections. Despite being a foot fanatic, stories like that are really well-written like this make it just a pleasure to read, regardless of how the tinies are done in! Great stuff.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2013 11:05 AM Title: The Queen’s Game
It was nice to see an update from this. You have a talent for making simple actions like a character being picked up and dangled by a shirt quite fun. Looking forward to your continuing this, however long it takes.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2012 7:59 AM Title: The Queen’s Game
love the story u got going here only hope u continue it soon, really love ur hand play descriptivness hope u add more soon
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. I am planning to write more, but I've just been really busy lately. Hopefully, I'll get back to it this coming week.
Date: October 13 2012 12:50 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
Please keep pool party
Author's Response:
I may get back to my Pool Party story eventually, but I'm just not feeling motivated for that right now. Inspiration struck, so I started writing this instead. Glad you like my work, though.
Date: September 29 2012 12:03 AM Title: The Queen’s Game
Very good story.
These are the kind of story i like cause it descripts very well the details in the process of shrinking, grabbing, how the tinies feel about it, etc
Very good. Thanks a lot!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it, and thanks for the specific feedback. As I said in my response below, it helps with knowing what to include when writing more.
And if you like the details of the shrinking, I think you'll like what I'm planning for chapter 5 and beyond. The story is called "Pawned!" for a reason - the boys won't be staying king sized forever. There's more shrinking coming.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2012 10:14 PM Title: The Queen’s Game
It was a nice surprise to find a story of this kind of quality on the most recent list. It's a simple idea, your characters have consistent and realistic personalities, and the dialogue is smooth and flowing. Keep it up, this was very enjoyable.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the specific feedback. Knowing exactly what it is that people like about a story helps me write more.