Reviews For Twin trouble
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Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

Another story! damn your head must be hudge coming up with all these great stories. I will wait till u get a few ch deep then I will read your story. I love how u get me to feel for your main charachter aka hero or victim.

Reviewer: ShadowCross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Chapter 2 is great. Dialogue was necessary to setup the characters. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

gotta have dialogue to set up the characters and story man but good job so far cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

So far...too much dialogue, not enough action.

I hope that it gets better. 

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