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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 10:06 AM Title: The After Effects

@ Tiny Guy:

The Moderators said they're working on it. But, right now, we have to use the "Most Recent" table of contents on the right-hand side of the home page.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 10:03 AM Title: The After Effects

I was right. Temporary regrowth, followed by more rapid shrinking than the first time. The question is...will Zack miss the meeting, or re-enlarge just barely in time for it?

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 6:02 PM Title: The After Effects

Interesting chapter.

PS: To the mods, there seems to be a problem with the "Most Recent" button. It doesn't send me to the page, instead, sending me to a page saying error.

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Date: July 01 2014 4:50 PM Title: The Morning After

Hmmmm! I wonder if Caroline's formula will prove to alternate?

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Date: June 25 2014 12:08 PM Title: Party Time

Hey-hey! Thanks for finally updating. This chapter is a perfect example of what I once told Wildcatman. Some guys who get shrunken, in gts-stories, aren't philandering jerks. They're just bashful types who unintentionally arouse the curiosity (or egotistical anger) of beautiful women who don't like being considered "resistible" by any man.

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Date: June 22 2014 10:19 AM Title: Awkward Run Ins

@ Alexobay: I actually find the slow pace refreshing! Where's it carved in stone that the male protagonists of stories, like this one, have to be shrunken in the first three chapters?

Reviewer: alexbobay32 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 11:13 PM Title: Awkward Run Ins

This is boring as blue balls.

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Date: June 18 2014 7:08 AM Title: Girl Talk

So, three future shrunken guys; three female roommates. At least, the math works out (lol)!

Thanks for updating so fast.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2014 10:12 AM Title: Family, Friends & More

I'm glad to see that you finally updated. I just hope it won't be _another_ 12 months, before we find out whether or not Jake, Jack, and Zack are going to be become the nucleus of Ashley's shrunken men-agerie. ;-)

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Date: November 26 2013 11:32 AM Title: Making New Connections

No chapter 4 in over a year???

Dude, that's "drawing it out" too much!

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Date: August 28 2012 10:20 AM Title: Making New Connections

Intriguing build up! I can't wait to see what happens at the party. :-)

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 1:57 AM Title: No Direction

 

Damn I didnt read the story info. shit goes down at the party Da. well now im looking forward to the next ch4. srry about my first post I jumped the gun a bit.



Author's Response:

Lol its okay, and dont' worry, I'm too big of a fan of the shrinking aspect to not include it. This story will easily be among my deepest and well planned out ones, so that's why I may draw it a bit more than you're used to. It will be worth the wait though

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 1:53 AM Title: Making New Connections

 

Great story I love character development but is their any shrinking in the story lol? Not try to be rude or anything its just uncommon to be 3ch deep with out anything happening yet. I still like the way the stoy is going though. keep up the good work

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Date: August 25 2012 8:12 PM Title: Family Issues & New Beginnings

The plot delightfully thickens. :-)

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Date: August 22 2012 8:50 PM Title: No Direction

Zack, to me, sounds like one of those multi-tasking prodigies who are so instinctively good at everything, that they have trouble focusing on just _one_ thing. And, thus, they get falsely accused of being under-achievers. A label, I feel, is used mostly (and way too freely) by natural-born over-achievers. The type for whom high school Career Days are useless, because they've already decided on their future goal-in-life before they've even entered seventh grade!

That alone is why I'm intrigued enough, by this story, that I will most definitely be tuning in for chapter 2.

;-)

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