Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed this lengthy story, where the boyfriend is grabbed without his girlfriends notice and played with, tortured and almost eaten while the girlfriend and her sister make the mad scramble against time and the largess of the camp to try to save him before the sister's friend or one of her friends do irreparable damage to him.

I think the story might have been better if they had arrived just a little late, with the first of the girl's friend having eaten him as she desired, them barging into the cabin as he's being deposited by the girl into the toilet. But, sometimes the threat of being vored is a good suspense builder.

Reviewer: Gadgetman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man Brad must be the calmest guy in the whole world...After every horrible thing that happened because of Ashley, I certainly would never even be in the same country as her.

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it!! But please let the guy win