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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 8:38 PM Title: Learning the truth

I vote that a girl puts him into her mouth, but that his real sister is in no way involved and doesn't know about it. (From your reply to Carycomic's review, this seems to work OK).



Author's Response: Yes I am going to have some parts were he is teased and there might be mouth play

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 3:21 PM Title: The shrink

I say the girls tease him and he has to work for the cure.



Author's Response: That may work:)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 8:47 AM Title: Learning the truth

So, let me get this straight (something that's a little hard to do, given the dialogue and narrative are still haven't been separated). Marrissa is more like the sister he never had?

Author's Response: Yeah sort of. She really cares about him and he cares about her.

Reviewer: Arbiter617 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 10:53 PM Title: The shrink

Great Job so far. I like to have a twist at the end like maybe she keeps him as a pet or she crushes him.

Author's Response: No killing but she might tease him. Also it could happen just not the way you think:)

Reviewer: Cheezo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 7:51 PM Title: The shrink

I like how this story is going. I just hope Marissa is a gentle giantess.



Author's Response: No she will be Gentle but she might tease him a bit:)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 7:38 PM Title: Car ride home and being found

Nothing involving the I-word, I hope! Otherwise, I might not be here, to review chapter 3.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 11:28 AM Title: The shrink

I vote marissa

Reviewer: Arbiter617 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 8:39 AM Title: The shrink

I vote Marrisa. I like how there is a choice at the end

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 8:23 AM Title: The shrink

Interesting start! Although, the cliff-hanger reads like a transcription straight from Writing.com. Just the same, I vote for Sabrina.*

*What can I say? I'm natural-born trend-bucker. ;-)

Reviewer: andymich65 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 6:37 PM Title: The shrink

MARISSAS!!!



Author's Response: Thank you for voting.

Reviewer: freeber Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 5:43 PM Title: The shrink

i say sabrina's shoe/flats if u can



Author's Response: Sure. If I get enough votes.

Reviewer: thestageofrage Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 4:32 PM Title: The shrink

I say marissas bag :3

Author's Response: Thank u for voting :)

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