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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2012 7:27 PM Title: Immortal?

Oh the pain! More of a vore man myself, but still going to keep reading.



Author's Response:

I might try a few vore chapters because I'm aware that it's a very popular category. The only problem is, I tried writing vore once before in my "Motherly love" story but it didn't go to well. I'm not very good at writing vore as I'm not much of a vore man myself. But theres a first time for everything so I may give it a try :) Glad you like the story.

Reviewer: supernatural Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 5:04 PM Title: Immortal?

the characters are histarical but not believable to me



Author's Response:

I do tend to exaggerate things quite a bit, including the way people behave. Do think maybe you can tell me what wasn't believable about them? Just so that I can improve on it in future chapters. 

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2012 8:00 PM Title: Immortal?

I always like stories where the character is immortal! Opens up SO many possibilities! Look forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the positive review! :)

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