[Report This]Date: October 02 2012 7:25 PM Title: Bad day at school
I'm guessing the starring role here will be Mandy's.
Date: July 30 2012 8:07 PM Title: Bad day at school
Great stuff, great stuff.
Good charactars, fantastic story line, feasible suspension of physics... this is looking like a top-notch story!
So, not to be rude, but, when do we get to the butt?!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Don't worry, the ass stuff will come, butt I have to build up to it first :) (Heh, see what I did there?) I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up. It could be tomorrow, it could be in a month. Sorry for being really inconsistant with my chapters, its just that I have a very busy schedule. But no matter how long it takes me to update the story, rest assured that the story most certainly isn't dead.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2012 10:39 AM Title: Bad day at school
just the way they act after seein the main character at this size. the sister is just too evil from the get go i would have built up to it because you didnt develope a positive or negitive relation ship in the begining. the mother was ok but with her child in that condition i doubt shed be thinkinng about breakfast. i hate to sound like im just dogging you but i did enjoy it. i think its funny but hey who am i
Author's Response:
I don't feel like you're "dogging" me at all. In fact, I'd choose a review like yours over "Great job, keep going!" anyday. These kind of reviews allow me to improve my stories. After all, what's a story without criticism? Thanks for the review and keep them coming! :)
[Report This]Date: July 21 2012 4:58 PM Title: Bad day at school
wow it actually made me laugh
[Report This]Date: June 06 2012 10:50 PM Title: Bad day at school
Great and I like how u make Luke look like a total idiot
Author's Response: Thanks. Luke is actually based on someone I know in real life and he is really that stupid XD
[Report This]Date: May 25 2012 1:42 AM Title: Bad day at school
Nice, More would be good.
Author's Response: Thanks. I will continue this story when I have ideas for it. I don't want to just reuse ideas I had in my other stories, I want each story to be unique. Suggestions are always welcome though.
Date: May 17 2012 8:30 PM Title: Bad day at school
Off to a good start. Me likey.
Author's Response: Thanks :) its pretty hard starting a new story with different characters who have different personalities. I also find myself constantly writing Brad and having to change it to Robert :/