[Report This]Date: August 24 2018 5:22 AM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Hope you're doing well and I just wanted to say that this story is amazing. I love how cruel and careless the mother is with her daughter and how she constantly tortures and humiliates her. It's probably one of my favs on this site.
Hope you don't mind me asking but do you ever plan on reuploading "family toejam"? I remember it being on here a few years back and it was also an incredible story. Was just wondering if you ever might bring it back here cause it was great too.
Date: February 26 2013 4:52 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Looks like Alisa and I are the only ones who can't wait to see Ms. Pattie again :(
Seriously, it's great to see you're back!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 24 2013 10:40 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Love the story and love how the girl changes, Hope to read more, keep the great literature coming.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm really striving to keep Alisa's state-of-mind believable, above all else.
Date: February 24 2013 10:13 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Good to see you back! You discribe the scenes very well and I can`t wait to see Alisa under Wendy`s feet.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: February 24 2013 5:54 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
If feedback is what gets you to continue, then I'm happy to ablige.
I honestly feel you are the strongest "mental" writer in this genre, you're able to make the world feel so cruel and unfair, so wonderfully rich.
Anyways, you need to establish some ages here, for Wendy, for Anna, for her mother, for that stuff.
Other then that: Background, you need more background. How about an anectode about her sister which she killed? How about the transformation of Wendy/Anna towards accepting she's 'meant' to be small?
See, the thing is that while your situations are mentally realistic for the main character, you NEED to establish why her mother and father have become so cruel. Is it just power? Do other families work like this?
I dunno, you answer :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the thoughtful reply and the encouragement.
Concerning the background, or lack thereof... hopefully some of that will be filled in for you in the next chapter or two.
Date: February 24 2013 2:05 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
love the storry helped me a lot with my work :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 24 2013 12:33 AM Title: Momma's Little Insole
the only bad saide of your story is your taking to long to update it you have no idea how long i have been waiting for the next chapter of your story to be added please continue :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, hopefully I won't take so long next time! :)
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 11:20 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
honestly everyone should read this story its so damn good. I love the inner struggle of finding her place in life and the addition of cruelty and kindnest from her "BF" and her sister.
I love that u set up more time with anna. Oh I love sisterly bonding, I hope she is not to cruel.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement. Wendy will probably play a larger role in chapters to come (I'm not sure about this, but I'm leaning that way right now).
[Report This]Date: February 23 2013 11:02 PM Title: Momma's Little Insole
Yes! Yes! Yes! months of hope finally payed off. got my story back lol. thx for the update great ch.