Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2016 3:45 PM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush

"I had planned to put you right back in my shoe the when get home"

I'm sure your OCD will make you rush here and correct that, and then you won't be able to stop, and write another chapter... bwahahahaha!

Reviewer: Luidgi Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2012 2:36 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush

Okay

 

This is the one single most best sotry ever.

 

Period. 

 

Now bring on the chapter 8 so I stop refreshing the page everyday in vain. 

 

Thank you. 

 

;)

Reviewer: Theodous Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2012 9:33 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush

Wow, I don't know how I've missed seeing this story on here all this time. But I've really been missing out. Being a huge fan of footplay and humiliation. I've read a great many stories involving such things. But very very few with the sense of scale that this one has. The fact that the main character was not only normal sized once, but cherished by her parents, just makes the whole thing that more intense. And show cases just how deep the effects of the shift in power has over people.

The very idea of someone being hellishly trapped in such a way, without the rest of the world having so much as a clue is a huge part of the story that I enjoy. Even if I do feel really really bad for the main character. But again, that in itself is because it's all so well written. You don't just guess at what she's going through. You experience itself. Both the physical and phycoligical pains of the torment she's going through.

Incredibly well done. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2012 9:30 AM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush

It's great to see you keeping the story in good shape rather than just adding!

I was wondering if there's a clean way to see chapter 6 as it was before the rewrite thoug -- I have it on my hard disk, so np for me, but I think that getting to see both sides of the story is a definite win.

Now I can't wait to see Ms Pattie.

 

 

 

Keep going!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.  I figured someone would ask that, and I did give that option some thought, but I do think the story flows better without the distraction of switching characters.  Also, I did make enough changes to the dialogue that things don't align perfectly anymore, so I would have to rewrite the original chapter again for it to truly make sense.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2012 11:52 PM Title: The Gigantic Girl-Crush

 

You are a master writer. Ok one I would love to hug u right now just for coming back to this story. In the past 2weeks ive come back to it like 10x lol. Two thid is by far the most cruelest story I have ever read. I wish God came down and actually took pity in Alisa. She is one of those characters who u actually feel bad for. I understand her thoughts on being crushed then actually being crushed. I dont know wht to say other than Plz oh Plz update again sooner rather than later! lol Again u my friend u are a Master!! "Feed Me More!"