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Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 3:20 PM Title: Beneath My Ex-Best Friend

cant wait for this story to come back. hope u have time

Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 12:54 PM Title: Beneath My Ex-Best Friend

Excelent chapters, and I loved the Mom character and the descrption of her feet. I hope to see more chapters here!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  There will be more "under Mom's feet" chapters in the future!

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 12:36 PM Title: Beneath My Ex-Best Friend

very nice descriptions your efforts are appreciated.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: carnaj2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 6:42 AM Title: Beneath My Ex-Best Friend

Please do continue. this was a great addition, getting some insight into Anna and loving her cruelty. Your writing is very good, free of errors in punctuation and grammar and you have a good grasp on how to make the characters sound real and speak like actual people. I like also that you are shifting perspective between the characters, and that helps keep the story fresh. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the shift to Anna's perspective in this last chapter.  Anna is fun to write in first-person, but I think the real fun will be shifting back to Alisa trying to cope with giantess Anna. 

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 3:26 AM Title: Beneath My Ex-Best Friend

Yes I want this story to continue please. I want to see what other kinds of hell Alisa is put through.

Dave



Author's Response:

Thanks Dave, 

I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for the encouragement to continue.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2012 3:25 AM Title: Beneath My Ex-Best Friend

Definitely continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the encouragement!

Reviewer: flospring Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 6:37 PM Title: Beneath My Ex-Best Friend

Continue the story, it's very good. I'm really fan of this type of stories. I hope Alisa will spend more time under her mom's foot! And I hope you will count this from both point of vue(from Alisa's and from her mom's.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the encouragement.

 

I'm glad you like reading both sides of the story, and I do plan to send Alisa back under her mom's foot. :)

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