Reviewer: Rodan1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I have a few suggestion sense I love the idea of tiny naked couples in trouble. First, up the rating to R or X sense there will more than likely be scenes of sex, possible humiliation, vore or the threat of vore, death and so on, because some not so nice giants, giantesses, and big animals like spiders may get a few of the tiny’s. Our two heroes can attempt to save them all, but they cannot save everyone, some will die. You can also come from the point of view of a tiny man or men running into a tiny woman or women and the couples try to make it to the hero’s house, and avoid becoming a science experiment for a scientist, or worse, find themselves at a schools show and tell. I would rather take my chances with a spider then a giant kid, their cruel.