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Reviewer: F_G_F Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

Nice!  A great add on to this story.  I am looking forward to reading more and seeing where this takes us.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2011 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

great story. love it when people get whats coming to them, like the guy on the train.

aaron

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

great chapter.
cool story.

aaron

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

I've always been facinated by Henry Hoover. Once I have my own house I will make sure I get one. Sorry, that's not important. I wonder waht Natalie has planned for Gordon. Well, it should be obvious to me, but you seem to be a very creative author.

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

My curiosity is piqued.  I will continue to follow this one to see where it goes, and look forward to future chapters!

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