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Reviewer: gerald Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time

There are so many problems with the characters and their actions that I am unable to even count them all - their behaviour is completely ridiculous for the situation, she can easily overpower him in so many ways - and yet asks to "kiss her feet"? He is at least reasonable at the beginning and obeys while trying to convince her with reason - but call her names later? What the heck?

Their discussions then become just silly - I don't know how a teenager would behave with such power, but the world would look much differently now if it was like that.

Now, I can understand your apparent desire to make the story more cruel later, but she could have simply shown that from the start - but she seemed simply not to care about him at all (or am I wrong about it), but now just behaves unreliably.

I am finished with the story after this chapter, since I cannot find any hope for the next ones. Sorry...

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time

Loving this story so far. I love how Samantha is treating the guy.

Dave

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2011 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Saturday Party Time

He's "shoe" in trouble, now. ;-)

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