Giantess World
Reviews For The story of Jason
Reviewer: Zorph27 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Date: October 12 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Great story can't wait to find out what comes next
Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Date: July 20 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
not a bad start man
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Author's Response:
Date: July 19 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
This could be a good story and it will be interesting to see how it develops, but I noticed some grammar mistakes, namely with the tenses.
Author's Response:
Yeah I still need to improve with grammar when I write my stories.