Giantess World
Reviews For The story of Jason
Reviewer: Zorph27 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Date: October 12 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Great story can't wait to find out what comes next
Reviewer: supernatural Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Date: July 29 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
that's disgusting, but i hope the rest of this isnt like that. i could have gone without that part. i really cant rate it until you through some mor dialog in there but it's still in the introduction part of the story. but um -nice- descripitive- um yeah you get the point
Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Date: July 20 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
not a bad start man
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
Author's Response:
Date: July 19 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Intro
This could be a good story and it will be interesting to see how it develops, but I noticed some grammar mistakes, namely with the tenses.
Author's Response:
Yeah I still need to improve with grammar when I write my stories.