Date: July 22 2011 5:04 AM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
please make him shrink mooore >< i want to see him in her ASS ><
but great story!!! keep it up XD
Author's Response:
Haha I wrote that last bit for you, ;) I figured you'd like that little after thought of her wanting to put him up her ass.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2011 1:53 AM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
10. Please keep it up
Author's Response:
Thank you, and I plan on it.
Date: July 22 2011 1:53 AM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
10. Please keep it up
Date: July 21 2011 8:07 PM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
FINISH IT!
incredible!
make him at least 5 inches..maybe smaller!
i want to know what her reaction is
but at the final seen. dont do diary!
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm not giving away how small I intend to make him, but I will say this, the story isn't finished yet, I've still got a fair few more chapters left to write.
[Report This]Date: July 21 2011 4:03 PM Title: Sarah's Thoughts.
I liked the diary motif. Lends the story an air of verisimilitude (a word that the legendary Carl Reiner once wanted to "stamp out;" lol!).
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like the story, and I can't see why he'd want it stamped out, but I guess in a sense I do, because it means to give a work of fiction truth when there isn't any truth in fiction.