[Report This]Date: July 14 2015 11:01 PM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
Beautiful story. Sarah's problem is that she couldn't stop the torture. She had a right to some revenge, but than goes overboard. Her carelessness put her brother in danger and ultimately his demise. She learned her lesson in a terrible hard way.
Seeing her brother's face in fear before he explodes. Knowing it was her fault and that she tortured him before that event. Her relationship with her parents not as good as before, because I can't them see loving her a much as before. That's a lot of pain.
Hopefully her son doesn't go the same way as James. She already failed as a sister. She better try not to fail as a mother as well.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2012 4:36 PM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
Amazing story! Loved every single chapter. However, I do have one critism. In the last chapter it's 10 years later yet she has a teenage son... What's up with that? Other than that, awesome story and I'll be looking out for that "shitty sequel" :P
Author's Response:
She had him at a younge age, and thanks, as for "shitty sequel" XD I do not believe in shitty sequels, I just believe that the directors/authors that make the sequels are either different, or outta their minds.
Date: February 29 2012 2:59 PM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
very sweet, certainly helps one understand the tragedy of the previous chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
[Report This]Date: February 27 2012 11:18 AM Title: Sarah's Final Thoughts.
Loved this ending. Was beautifully written. And it kinda brought back some memories from when I was a child. Thank you.
Aaron
Hope that you do indeed write a sequeal or a similar story.
Author's Response:
Oh wow, I'm kinda touched to read that, I'm very glad that you enjoyed it, and I'm glad that it was able to touch you in some way. ^_^ The goal of any good author is to write a story that will not only draw the readers in, but help bring something that they can related to in some way.