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Reviewer: mad dog Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2017 10:11 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

is it alread written if so were is it 

Reviewer: loyde69 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2017 1:43 AM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

it has been at least a year' did you stop writing,I would give it a rating but honestly to be fair don't get me wrong your writing is really good but like the person who's writing the story succubus sumoning ,well it was 2016 its almost 2018 please don't  do like him talk about  a big let down 

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 5:06 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

when will you write some more,it's good so far 

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 7:53 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

it would be a good story but it starts off and ended.. it's a old story are you going to write any more there is not a nuff to rate so I will wait for more

Reviewer: Perkjeff905 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 8:29 AM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

When will the second part be available

Reviewer: Uhpoop Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 10:40 AM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

No regrow not cool forget what I said earlier

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2012 8:23 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

Love the story, are you going to finish it?

Reviewer: Arbiter617 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 12:13 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

Good but why is Rachel keeping him as a pet?

Reviewer: tinyfootlover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2012 3:08 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

just 2 questions are u going to bring us to the present? and will thiss start a war between britany and rachel?

 

Reviewer: Infinity5 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 6:00 PM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

An idea for tge next chapter is you can have tge girls dress him up in doll clothes

Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2011 5:42 AM Title: Explaining things to Mark. Brittany learns her place.

y is she being evil i thouhgt they were friends?



Author's Response:

It's called twist.

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