[Report This]Date: March 23 2011 11:10 AM Title: The start of a long night
Lovin' the story. Maybe have one of the girls trap him in her boot (uggs?) and play crush him under the sole of the boot and worship it. Either way can't wait for the rest.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2011 10:28 AM Title: The start of a long night
Liked the story. Especially the last part of Chapter III. Hope there will be more like it in the rest of the story.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2011 10:48 PM Title: The start of a long night
Good story.
What's a "tree hill girl"?
Author's Response:
One tree hill from the show. The girls on there.
Date: March 21 2011 4:54 PM Title: The start of a long night
I belive that this is a very good start to the story.
Date: March 21 2011 3:57 PM Title: The start of a long night
realy i see no problem, now you just got to figure out the concluusion and after that figure out how yoour going to get to the conclusion. every good writer knows therebegining and end before it ever goes down on paper s
p.s. sorry about the spelling iwas typing and on the exercis bike at the same time
[Report This]Date: March 21 2011 3:47 PM Title: The start of a long night
I LOVE giantess cheerleaders. Can't wait for the next addition.
[Report This]Date: March 21 2011 8:53 AM Title: The start of a long night
good start.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind review. Like i said it's hard coming up with a starting point.