[Report This]Date: September 09 2011 5:27 AM Title: Daydreaming
This is missing an 'inside the stomach' paragraph.
Also i think Brianna should've had a bigger role after he'd shrunk
Other than that, this story was spectacular.
I am in love with that teacher, i really want to be her student.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2011 12:42 AM Title: Daydreaming
This was a fantastic story. I really enjoyed it very much. Are you still planning an epilogue? I hope so. To me the most interesting character in the story was Brianna. I would love to find out the things she does to her shrunken teacher. Please do your epilogue idea.
[Report This]Date: April 12 2011 1:02 AM Title: Daydreaming
Great story. I hope you are still planning an epilogue. I loved Brianna in this story. I would love to know what she does with her shunken teacher.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2011 8:20 PM Title: Daydreaming
really liking the story so far. please continue
[Report This]Date: March 20 2011 12:28 AM Title: Daydreaming
Great story. Cant wait to see the situations he's put in to.
Date: March 13 2011 10:02 PM Title: Daydreaming
awesome story....please continue
Author's Response:
The story is actually already finished. I just haven't proof read the rest of it, so don't worry, this won't be an unfinished story.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2011 8:22 PM Title: Daydreaming
I think this a great story although the speeches that Tiffany and Brianna make are a bit over the top. I'm curious as to when he shrinks only Tiffany toys with him or Brianna joins in as well.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2011 6:03 PM Title: Daydreaming
Promising start!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2011 10:06 AM Title: Daydreaming
looking forward to the next chapter. love the foot play an the characters are kinda cliche but im a sucker for predictability(an senual foot rubs)
only wish that the teacher wasnt such an... idk... 'extreme feminist'. but hopefully youll explain why in the chapters to come.
aaron
ps are tiffany's toe-nails painted, if so what shade?
Author's Response:
The reason she's an extreme feminist is simple. The guy who commissioned this story wanted the teacher to be an extreme feminist. No other reason more than that. She just thinks the male race are insects compared to the female gender.
The toe nail thing will be completely up to your interpretation. I never talk about it in the entire story and the story has already been finished. I just haven't uploaded the other 8 or so chapters because that stuff hasn't been proof read yet.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2011 12:56 AM Title: Daydreaming
There's something about certain authors who write this sort of thing that allow them to instill a very powerful sensuality into their writing, even with very few words. I don't know what that thing is, but you certainly seem to have it.
If you don't get many comments on this story, don't assume it's because of some fault of yours, and then become discouraged. We all just finished our guilty pleasures before we got a chance to review it.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2011 6:09 PM Title: Daydreaming
OK. Good start.
A well-written story.
Please continue.
Author's Response: It'll be continued. The story is actually already finished. I just haven't proof read the rest of the stuff, so don't worry, this won't be an unfinished story.