Date: December 29 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is my second review, Sil, to see whether you receive it as you asked me to do. I re-read this story and still became excited by the daughter's actions. Head first would have "blown my top" as they say. You write jolly good yarns!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Head first could lead to suffocation, and i didn't want him to die.
In case you were wondering, no I didn't get an e-mail like i should've.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is another great one. I agree with banfields statement. not too many stories where the justice system shrinks people and enslaves them and thats why i love those the most.
again, wiht this story, i can see how its a good ending leaving him with the daughter but i'd like to know what else she would do to him. oh well thats just my preference anyway
Author's Response: Thats is true, but it just seemed like a good way to end. Any more and i would have just been repeating parts. Thanks for the comment
Date: December 12 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, Sil, I really enjoyed this short yarn! It happens to be one of my favourite fantasies - to be inserted as Nick was, and by a seemingly young girl. Very well done!
Author's Response: Why thank you