Date: December 01 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
How was phil not suicidal?
[Report This]Date: August 01 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a very well written story. I especially loved the facesitting part. I kind of sympathise with the character of the boy. He's always embarassed, humiliated infront of everyone on his birthday, his attempts of having a girlfriend ruined by his mother, he was humiliated on television, he fed on his mother's waste. living in her mother's ass the best part was how the mother shrank him and brought him to full size.. These all angles are unique and awesome. I really enjoyed reading them. I personally like the way you described each activity. While reading I sometime had the feeling that I was that boy. Very good and unique story. I hope to read more of it very soon. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with the world.
Date: July 04 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love your work!!! I enjoy all the stuffs and the way that phil's mom daominate him.
I red your story for the first time during it progress, and now i'am hoping to see a chapter 18, 19,.....
will you continue it, or do I resign to not see an as well story stop here?
Author's Response:
Thanks, it's nice to hear you enjoyed it.
I actually had one ending planned out and then scrapped it for another, and then life and work got in the way.
I'll try and finish it though.
Date: April 20 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say I have been enjoying this story so much.All the stuff is amazing to me, especially drinking butt sweat and toilet stuff. And what turns me on most is the way the mother humiliate her son in words, which sounds sweet but unrejectable.I feel both jealous and sympathy for the hero to have such a mother possessing beauty,power,srrong will and cruelty.What a fantastic stort it is!
However, I think butt sweat isn't enough for the son to drink for life,so what about other liquid,such as .Looking forward to your new work.And I'd like the hero and his mother to be younger next time. Personally I think it is more exciting when a little boy is tutored and loved this way.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way this story more or less abandons a plot and snapshots around to different points of their, uh, relationship (for your female character I think of "generic 40 yr old woman" or something). That's kind of the way I read it, skipping around. The vore and scatalogical stuff kind of grosses me out (but so does something minor like chewing with the mouth open), but I love the interesting power dynamic you have going, and most of the sketches.
Author's Response:
I started this story up with the idea of having as lose a plot in mind as possible, and to be honest, beyond setting up a consistent background for Phil's mom to be dominating him it's become something of a hindrance. The time-skip set up allowed me to explore a lot of new ideas that I previously couldn't, but then I still find I have a bunch more for a more grounded mother-and-son-in-the-home scenario. That's part of the reason it took so long for me to get this finished.
Oh and don't worry about the toilet stuff. I never thought it was too bad (though of course it's a polarizing fetish) but it's pretty much gone away now.
Date: April 09 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Will this story end with Phil exacting his revenge? Because that would be amazing!
I await the next update.
Date: June 24 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
great stuff. love it all
[Report This]Date: May 23 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love ass worship stories and I'm addicted to this story. Great job. Please keep going.
Dave
[Report This]Date: January 10 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good Story, Very unique. I like how he submits right away. i usually draw it out.
Author's Response:
It's not so much that he's submitting. I'm not entirely set on what I'm going for but we'll see what happens.
Oh and I like your stories on writing.com, so thanks for the kind words!
Date: December 22 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hope you continue this - its a fantastic story and you are developing a most interesting dynamic between the two characters.
Author's Response:
That's what I was going for, something you don't normally see between the two parties. So thanks!
Date: October 25 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far a great story. I am really enjoying reading it.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is extremely well written, full of spot-on description! I actuall see these characters. The tension between the mother's playfullness and her cruel actions, work pefectly. The son is simply being overshelmed into accepting the power of his mother's bodies and odors to control him. Keep this up; it's one of the finest stories I've come across that deals with this theme!
Author's Response:
I was really chuffed to get a comment from this guy, so there you go. Look up his stuff if you haven't, it's a lot darker than I'd like but really good.