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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

This story is pretty neat. It says you've completed it but each chapter has "to continued..." at the end. Though I have read the end of the thrid one (the last one) and it says "the end for now" so I can only assume you will continue it in the future.

Could do with a little more description to help the reader vizualize but I don't think that much more is needed.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOL! Great ending. And, not a bad way to rejoin the club, either.

Welcome home, Mr_G! It's been too long.

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