[Report This]Date: June 01 2013 4:03 AM Title: Brace Yourself
I love how deliciously disgusting Melissa is. You should have had the mother and daughter customers at the end shrink down and become her slaves, and carried on the story from their perspective as her micro slaves. :)
[Report This]Date: April 24 2013 10:35 AM Title: Brace Yourself
Love the life threatening unaware scenario. Hope you continue to write stories you have talent.
Date: April 21 2013 9:45 PM Title: Brace Yourself
Excellent story. This is simply one of the best unaware stories I have ever read. You explore many different parts of the genre seemlessly and give extremely vivid descriptions. The most recent chapter hints at a shower, is there going to be a bathroom scene?
[Report This]Date: April 04 2013 8:35 PM Title: Smells like progress
I'm loving this story and I hope he ends up back in her butt with either aware or unaware
[Report This]Date: March 11 2013 10:29 PM Title: Brace Yourself
Finally!
I've been waiting for an update for like, forever, and you did not disappoint!
Date: March 10 2013 11:46 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
Excellent story!! Hope to see some more content soon!
[Report This]Date: October 25 2012 4:39 AM Title: Grease Jungle
So sad you have not finished this. This story is one of my favorites I have ever read.
Date: July 07 2012 1:07 AM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
One of the best stories on the site. There's not enough unaware humiliation stuff like this.
Date: March 15 2012 11:22 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
To everyone who commented:
You guys kick the most ass. Thanks for your support, critiscism and insight. I will continue to write the best story that I can by using your input. Your support has truly motivated me and I thank you. Send me anything; love, hate, all of it helps me get better. Thanks again.
Date: March 15 2012 6:47 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
I honestly have no idea where he is going next, and I like it!
So is he just going to do a grand tour of all her orifices? B/c that sounds pretty hot.
But I do hope that, eventually, he makes his way back to the good spots.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2012 10:20 AM Title: Grease Jungle
Great story! I've enjoyed it right from the beginning. Will the whole story be voyuer? Or will he be found eventually?
[Report This]Date: March 11 2012 5:26 PM Title: Grease Jungle
Good story; please continue this inadvertant body eploration.
Date: March 05 2012 1:28 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
I reeeeeally hope that that "Finished" box is a lie. I desperately need more of this!
[Report This]Date: February 24 2012 3:15 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
Hey,
just wanted to let you know this is one of the best unaware story Ive read on here for a while. I thought they died out for sure. Perfect shrinking size, great details, awesome humiliation moments. I hope it will stay unaware and will contain another anal vore or/and vore ending too, containing digestion maybe. Keep up the great work, Im sure there are lots of people on here who would see something like this continued even on a new story.
Date: February 24 2012 2:23 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
Great story! I so wanted her to swallow him! xD
[Report This]Date: February 23 2012 10:24 PM Title: Breast Ex Machina
love your ending. best last line ever
Date: February 23 2012 7:48 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
Fake out? Nice! You can really write a good story.
Date: February 23 2012 2:04 PM Title: Breast Ex Machina
Excellent setup! I love stories involving breast torture, and I hope the next chapter has plenty of it!
Date: February 22 2012 9:16 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
Ah. Vore time. So much for the unexplored territories. No offense intended, but vore has been done thousands of times.
Date: February 22 2012 9:15 PM Title: Melissa goes from boss to giantess
Ah. Vore time. So much for the unexplored territories.