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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm suprised this hasn't been reviewed yet. One thing I will say is to have the speech on seperate lines. On to the next chapter.

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