[Report This]Date: May 16 2025 4:56 AM Title: The Redneck
Incredible chapter, exactly as I envisioned within your style of writing. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: May 15 2025 3:43 PM Title: Cody
The best chapter so far, and that way of describing with great detail is what I love the most, beside to knowing a little about Joanna's past.
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Not quite sure how much I want to reveal about Joanna's past. But I do have ideas for a story about her when she was younger, when she started doing what she does. Otherwise, I'm still leaving exactly how she shrinks people a bit ambiguous at the moment. I haven't decided exactly how she does it. When I do I will probably update my stories with the new information. If you like this story so far, this is part of a greater series, most of it centering around Joanna.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2025 9:06 PM Title: Freddy
The shrunken person may be a man who only criticizes, judges, and believes that he is always right about everything, and that he is never wrong.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2025 3:48 AM Title: Freddy
Enjoying this so far! Keep it up!
Here’s one idea (doesn’t have to be this particular story but in the same vain): a man at the restaurant is grossed out by a woman breastfeeding their baby and makes a huge scene to the point where the woman leaves feeling embarrassed and humiliated. Joanna gets revenge by shrinking the man down and then depositing him in one of her coworkers bottles used for their breast pump. The coworker uses the breast pump on their break and the man is soon trying to stay afloat in her breast milk. The coworker then goes home at the end of their shift, taking their pumped milk with them to give to their baby.
Author's Response:
Well, that could be done. But I might be selective on what’s written. Personally, not super comfortable having kids in these kinds of stories. If I did write this, it might end up more vague.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2025 8:33 PM Title: Freddy
I like the concept very much and I'll be watching eagerly as you upload more, and I LOVE the way you talk about internal scenes too. Very detailed.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
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Thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: May 10 2025 5:35 PM Title: Bradley
Very good chapter, what if the next dish was a lasagna? And the client was a strict woman who works as an urban life planner
Author's Response:
Any requests on the shrunken person?