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Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2024 5:19 AM Title: Part 2

Glad to see everything has been fixed with this story. XD
I got worried got a sec when the first chapter disappeared. There are still 2 Part 2's but that's not too big a deal.

Fun concept, I really love this idea and would love to see how you evolve it. It reminds me of the story See No Evil by Vaalser4. Overall you have a good setup so far and I'm very much excited to see where you take it.

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