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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2024 4:04 PM Title: Humanity's New World

This story continues to be my favorite of your work and commissions like the world perfect, characters firing on all cylinders, the story progression amazing and thessalia and Richard relationship is amazing I love them so much and I can’t wait to see where they go next 

ps - I hope they have a human son and elf daughter creating a fun sibling rivalry where the son is forced to be small but has high magic potential while the sister is big but magic is poor compared to the average elf but has tactical skills like her dad or something like that but this just a suggestion 


can’t wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

This one will be on a short break until the start of the "next act" taking place in a world where the elves have completely overtaken humanity, and where the pet life for humans is the norm. 

I could see Richard and Thessalia having half-elf kids, how exactly that works in this universe I haven't decided yet, but the pair have plenty of time to figure it out now that they're both immortal, or close to it. 

Reviewer: SomeRandomGoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2024 2:02 PM Title: Humanity's New World

Loved the diplomacy scene, the banter with the dragon lady made me chuckle. Poor humies, getting passed around like favored toys...


Wow, nature itself conspiring to snuff out any remnant human realms? And even then the dominance is benevolent? Maybe the goddess's "command" wasn't as misinterpreted as we thought...


And Richard gets an unexpected gift. Thesalia genuinely loves him to pull something like this. 

Hmm...what next? Will we see how humans fare with a dragonkin mistress? Perhaps human engineers helping beegirls turn their hive into a steampunk honey factory?

Or Brunhilde mourning Sir Bottomlove?



Author's Response:

Yeah humanity got demoted down to pet status pretty quickly, luckily the elves will probably keep the other races from abusing them too much. We'll check back in with the goddess at some point, but nature itself is changing to put humans lower in the natural order, with more and more monstergirls appearing every year as the magic in the world increases.

Thessalia and Richard are in love in spite of everything, and Richard is the best candidate for the treatment given his intelligence and looks. Also Sir bottomlove is probably in the afterlife having a grand time somewhere, maybe his spirit will visit Brunhilde in a dream? Of course we know what she'd do to his spectral form. 

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