Reviews For An Oni's Way
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Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2024 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cute chapter!

Reviewer: Velasco Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I gotta admit, I'm a sucker for these kind of stories, where you have a massive, ruthless giant that slowly begins to care for some people. I agree with  the other reviewers, good worldbuilding and descriptions, that are very good in conveying the the sheer power  and magnitude of Kayza, and the impact that their actions have, even in the landscape.

I also loved how you switched between the humans' and the giant's perspectives, and the reaction of the captured hunter after the encounter seemed really natural to me

I hope you will continue this story

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 09 2024 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Top notch story!!!  Simply incredible.  A HUGE WOMAN {"Kayza.Crimson Oni"} dominating an entire countryside and stomping out an entire goblin army, yet feeling sympathy for humans due to one defiant human is fantastic.

There are a few grammatical errors throughout, which led to a bit of confusion; yet nothing too distracting..

Can't wait to read more or this story.  Please continue this story.

Reviewer: rghud945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2024 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like that the contrast shown on Kayza, with such a powerful and frightening image yet she keep remembering that human like a teenage girl in love. The detailed description of her thoughts and feelings, showing that she is bored of mindless killing and instead wanted to be worshipped now, does make the whole plot more reasonable and natural.

The goblins scene is very juicy and hot. Also It's quite funny that Jameson is not actually a GigaChad as he showed during the encounter, his weaknesses actually add some vividness to his character.

At first I am a bit baffled by the "FM/m" tag in Size Roles, but I think Kayza seems much taller than 500ft. to start with, so perhaps it is just a mistag? Anyway, still very much look forward to the second chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi, thank for you leaving a review!

The tagging system left me confused and I entered them rather haphazardly. I never specifically stated how big she was but the overall description of her actions would place her somewhere beyond 500ft tall. I've adjusted it all now.

-TUD.

Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2024 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this! This is exactly my favorite kind of story where you have an absurdly powerful, normally ruthless and cruel giantess who is swayed by nothing other than her emotions and feelings for someone into becoming gentle towards the people she likes. Great world building and way to give us a bit of insight into the humans while focusing on the giantess which is what we want of course. The goblins also gave her a great excuse to let loose.

Author's Response:

Hi, thank you for leaving a review!

Funny to see how transparent my inclusion of the goblin section was! The writer side of me wanted to justify it as a 'show, dont tell' example of how destructive Kayza could have been to the humans as well as just how contemptible she finds others. But really it was a few paragraphs of self-indulgence strung together to make it seem a step above simple gratuitous slaughter!

-TUD.

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