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Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2024 7:51 PM Title: Spider-Mite and Pepper Potts

'let her trample him over and over again as took care of the last few details before work. '
*as she took care

'He was no match for any of his toes.'
*her toes.

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Thank you.

Reviewer: suce57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2024 6:35 PM Title: A Mother's Pleasure

Love this chapter 

Reviewer: suce57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2024 1:43 PM Title: New Donk's Tallest Tourist

Mother’s pleasure was a great chapter. Love the husband wife theme.  

Reviewer: Master_Builder Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2024 5:30 PM Title: The Great One's Embrace

That was really cool.

Reviewer: Lugubrious Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 24 2024 4:45 PM Title: Shrinking with Roommate's Feet

Great chapter... But I feel like it's incomplete for some reason... or I'm just wondering what would happen next in this situation. There's a lot of build up to what could possibly happen next with her still sleeping and him being the size of a doll.

Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2024 11:47 PM Title: Alicent's Ascension

This was a masterpiece. Really hit a spot. Only thing that would have made it better, in my opinion, is if she had crushed dragonstone under her ass.

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