[Report This]Date: April 26 2024 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 17: Love
Hey, she said it! She said the thing!!
While I've been mentioning the beauty of Trish getting turned on by turning Thomas on, by being her "dream guy's dream girl," it was still great to see her say it out loud in that little back and forth there at the end of the chapter. This may be the sweetest, most wholesome concept ever conceived within stories about this particular fetish. And that wholesomeness really amplifies the, uh, less wholesome things Thomas and Trish get up to together in such a unique way. the sex scenes are hot, but they're so much more than that; there's so much emotion and depth to them.
Also, while on the subject, I still love how you continue to find ways to have Trish envision Thomas's actions on her body as if he were just a part of a same-sized person. It fits that concept of her not being into the size difference in the same way as Thomas, but still being into him being into her. I've mentioned this before, but I thought her comparing him walking up her back to him drumming his fingers up his spine was particularly clever.
And, of course, her making him try to undress her is always fun. It's such a creative way for her to playfully dominate him.
But while Trish admitted to not being sexually into her domination of Thomas in and of itself, this chapter continued the growing trend of her getting into dominating people in general. She's really starting to enjoy throwing her weight around, although she's not being mean about it.
Yeah, she made her worshippers do some stuff to get Thomas hard, but I think her enjoyment of that whole interaction clearly went beyond just that. She appreciated them giving her gifts and adoring her. And her finding them following her commands to be cute is probably the most Trish thing she could think about it.
I also like the contrast between how she handled the worshippers and her daddy's security team. She showed a little authority at times, like when she blocked Gary from approaching the worshippers with her hand, but instead of just ordering him around and intimidating him with her size, she resorted to the most dastardly trick in her arsenal: the puppy dog eyes. That she got her way by melting his heart instead of simply forcing him to comply shows that while Trish is really starting to rather like being a giant and the power that comes with it, she's still the same sweet, loving person she's been this whole time. Little touches like that, reminding us of who Trish is, help keep the tone of the story on track, I think.
I was a big fan of the idea of Trish learning sign language when it was first introduced, but I particularly love the way that idea was applied here. With Thomas serving as her "herald," him translating most of what she was saying placed extra emphasis on those times where she decided to speak with her own voice. It's kind of a less is more thing, at least in my mind. It also allowed for Thomas and Trish to have a few "private" moments together despite being surrounded by worshippers and security, with Thomas having one-sided discussions with Trish before making her will known (and losing those discussions to the silent side!). The best of those moments was clearly when Thomas questioned her and she got him hard with just a look.
Just Patricia! I love how dense the crunchy people are here, and, again, this was a clever bit of dialogue.
I'm curious to see if/how Trish's interaction with the worshippers, particularly her instructions to them before leaving, play out later in the story. Does her telling them to perform good acts make people love her more, or will the government maybe use this to make people think that she's power tripping and manipulating people? Or possibly a third thing. Who knows (well, other than you, obviously)?