Reviewer: Deadcrow Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2024 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

I have been obsessed over this story for the past week, I can tell how his siblings and mom are slowly loving him in taboo ways which I am all for it. I hope maybe Jacob gives into his desires and just accepts the gift of his family feet. I do want to see more of mom scene like how she can spoil her son with her feet even though her dirty flats were the cause of this whole story. keep up the work tho

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2024 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

Omg this was amazing and so wholesome between mother and son like damn brought a tear to my eyes 

oh boy I wonder how traumatizing this reunion between Jake and Grace will be probably going to fun too lol

and damn do I feel bad for Nine maybe him and Jake could come to an understanding or at least help each other out but who knows 

nice job and sorry that work life has been getting busier but don’t worry we can wait for you so take your time dude 👍

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2024 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

I take it back. Nicky is now my best girl! I'm glad she's back for more! I really love her dynamic with Jake. You can really feel they are actually siblings

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2024 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

Damn I’m loving these new characters not only do I get another milf in Tammy but also two more hot girls in Corey and Carol just simply amazing and I can’t wait to see what the next day brings.

but the real question is who is Jake sleeping with tonight my guess are either Jenna or Becca for now and I can only imagine a night with Jada could be lol which I definitely want to see later on.

Nice Job as always 

also congrats on 20 chapters and here’s to getting 100k views next

Reviewer: Roby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2024 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

I think the best episode so far was the Jada and Jack episode. Jada's foot feeding and farting took the story to a new level.

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2024 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

Whooooooooo I love it Jada action and spending time with Becca and Jenna being the sexy MILF that she is man I can’t wait to see what the other girls will do now in the pool party 

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2024 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 19

Still really enjoying this story, I love the characters actually feel like normal people that are fun to be around. I get the feeling Jake may struggle around his moms friends. Look forward to more :) 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I try and make them more than one note, or sexual objects, so I'm glad you think so! Glad you're enjoying the story as well!

Reviewer: Iunno Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 18

I do love how these characters feel like actual characters for the most part. I mean no offense but I fully expected only smut lol no story.

Jada talks about how she pretty much made herself an archetype to stand out as a middle child.

Chen coming to the realization that she relied on having Jake as a malleable and easily manipulated boy toy just as much as he relied on her(rare to see gts stories that actually pay mind to the potential negative effects that owning a specific tiny person would have on the owner. Usually just the tiny is affected)

Jenna's mental gymnastics about her son and just being happy he's back.

Really excited to see where this goes. I have a prediction but it all depends on whether or not all your tags and size roles tell the exact future of the story or some things are left out.

Keep up the good work

Author's Response:

I do plan on incorporating all the tags I have! And thank you, yeah, I want the characters to feel like actual characters that think in their own right, not just walking body parts that Jake will be smothered under at some point!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2024 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Sniff 😢 omg that was beautiful 🥹😭😭😭 this chapter was everything I could have imagined 😭😭😭 thank you for this gift and Finally we get to see Jada greatness as she is officially my favorite sister of the family and it only took her 1 chapter 🤧🤧🤧🤧

here to future interactions of Jake and Jada always being this way and once again thank you 😊 

Author's Response:

Thanks as always for your support! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

This might not be the most popular opinion, but I hope Jake grows enough to be heard or at least someone like Nicole gets the devices to comunicate with him. I say someone like Nicole, first because she is my favorite character right now. Jake’s description of her is perfect: a adorable dork. Her interactions with him are by far the most wholesome.

I know most don’t seek this in a story about fetish, but to me it’s important to have a story and character relations backing up the more steamy parts.
Which brings me to the topic of Jake having desires and feelings he shouldn’t have for his family. Desires because he feels some level of arousal – and feelings because he sees his family as a family as monsters while, at the same time, seeking punishment for desires they – his sisters - seem happy to stimulate on him.

Now this is aimportant part most stories on the site gloss over: only the one who is small bears all the moral burden. But Jake’s sisters and even his mother have some sort of connection with him that clearly exceeds the boundaries of fraternal love.

That’s why I said my opinion/sugestion might not be the most popular: to see Jake grow just enough to be heard and seen in some detail. Maybe the size of a bug is enough to play and interact more, especially with Nicole.

Due to having barely meet before, I can see Nicole accidentally developing something towards Jake. Something she shouldn’t and that will leave her feeling guilty, feeling like a degenerate… just like Jake. To feel like he feels – which would lead to a better, more mature, understanding the situation and torments he is currently facing when compared to the rest of the family nucleus.

Jake is always very selfaware, to the point of blaming himself for things he objectively has no control over. Most of all, him trying his best to connect
despite the size difference is endearing to me. And would be interesting to see him strugling with those feelings together with Nicole. They seem, after all, to be very alike in some points.

And because it would be interesting to see how it can affect not only their budding relationship, but also “goddess” Chein indoctrination and plans and the rest of the family. Would Jake say Nicole is wrong for having such feelings and thoughts? Like Jake recognized, he is no angel. But neither are his family and everyone aroud him. What about Jenna? Would she get angry at Jake? Or maybe blame herself and choose to hand Jake back to Innomed as to stop Nick and the others from seeing him?

It’s just an idea that ocurred to me – since Jake’s self loathing steam’s most from his desires being linked to his family… well, what if it happened the other way around too? I mean, one of the sisters developing real feelings and desires linked to him?

Thanks for your kind response before. Let me know what you think or if I am talking nonsense.

Did you already had a number of chapters ready beforehand? I think I've never seen a uploading pace quite like yours (not complaining - I am really glad for that!)

Again, thanks for writng and sharing with us! I hope I will be able to see the end of Jake’s olfactory odyssey.

Author's Response: I don't have anything pre-written, I just sit down for a couple hours, sometimes I can get a whole chapter out there in a day if I try hard enough! And as for your idea, no spoilers but you're dangerously close to predicting things that I have planned! haha! Thank you for your kind words friend!