[Report This]Date: January 06 2024 3:32 AM Title: Day 3 - Night Match
That’s me, LOL, don’t worry about it!
For context I will post my comment (vaguely) again:
I like how you showcase the size of Meg, the scenes where she compared her new size with objects appeared in previous chapter is nice and hot. The mention of measurements and numbers are very detailed and I enjoy it a lot.
Now it’s only chapter 3 and she’s already quite big, knowing that there would be 7 more rounds I can only imagine how gigantic she would be, and that’s so exciting!
I am curious about one thing though, usually in a giantess story, as the giantess becomes more powerful as she grows bigger, her acts and words would be more carefree and leisurely since she is so much above others; she can dominate tinies or environment without even trying, the description of her effortless is a way to show the contrast and “empower” her image to the reader.
In chapter 1, even when Meg was shorter than Tom, she sounded confident and in control. But in chapter 3, when Tom attempted to bite and cursed her near the end, Meg seems to… lose her composure? Her reactions like screaming are quite serious and unexpected when she is already at a size that can overpower Tom with ease, so that’s a bit unnatural to me. Just my personal opinion and I would like to know about your thought for a bit more.
Author's Response:
Great! So glad I caught you.
Now as far as your question. I totally get what you mean. It's like when you read a basketball scenario and the 5-foot guy manages to win against the 15-foot giantess or something. It's always a bit dissonant to me, like, that would never happen.
Now while I'm trying to stray from that level of ridiculousness, I admit I'm allowing Tom to get under Meg's skin a bit. Yes she was confident even during the match she lost, but she KNEW she was going to lose. She would never dream that Tom would retaliate so sharply when she's the size of a house, but then he did.
The main reason, however, is because I want to display many sides of Meg; confident, playful, mean, frustrated, cruel, dominant, etc. And sometimes to do that I have to contrive a little bit. I think the tradeoff of her reactions being a tad inconsistent is better than her demeanor being more or less the same for up to ten chapters.
Also, as someone who finds far too many stories on here over-inflated with exposition, setup, world-building, etc, I really will go out of my way to paint a good size-play scenario. I'm sure better writers could pull it off more elegantly, but I'm very inexperienced lol.
Lastly, Meg also just LOVES being huge, and getting bigger. So that can kind of unravel her in other ways (or make her scream).
Hopefully this massive reply isn't exhausting, I do totally understand where you're coming from, but I hope this helps communicate what I'm going for. Thanks so much again for reposting your review after I dumbly removed it lol. Cheers!
Date: January 05 2024 3:08 AM Title: Day 1 - Small Beginnings
Hey so I meant to delete a response to a review so I could edit it slightly and did not realize I was deleting the entire review (why am I allowed to do that lol). So I’m very sorry, it was a great review and I just wanted to curate my response perfectly. If whoever wrote that can see this, you have my apologies and I hope to hear from you again on future chapters.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2024 8:06 PM Title: Day 3 - Night Match
Fucking. Amazing! Even better than the first two chapters, I love how easily the dialogue and action flows between the two of them... and I can only imagine how much bigger she's going to be next match. First she tripled... then she quadrupled in size? If she keeps up a rate like that, the whole CITY will fit under her toe by the last match! I hope she just gets completely drunk on her own power, I can't wait for the next chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Thanks Cara, I like my growth spurts how I like my women: huge.
[Report This]Date: December 17 2023 9:54 PM Title: Day 1 - Small Beginnings
Can I just say that this story is already shaping up to be phenomenal!
Love the premise of the round system and how each subsequent one is only going to get exponentially worse, for HIM!
I particularly liked how he was able to tuck a win under his belt, in the beginning, just as a nudge of confidence; pride cometh before the fall, and man does it make the reverse sweep all the sweeter~
Funny enough, this reminds me of a story I read AGEs ago.
Taking a bit of the description from the text itself:
"In this program, idols and athletes compete in sports, but since the idols would naturally lose if they faced off, the size ratio between the idols and athletes is decided in proportion to the web support votes from viewers."
So, the fact I get to see another take on a plot point I enjoyed in the past is a type of nostalgia fever dream.
But even more than that, it's interesting to see how her size changing (growth) will affect the way the matches are carried out.
I believe Shakespeare said something to the effect of...
"All the world's a stage"
Wondering how true those words will ring out!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. The stage is really, really big. But we’ll have to see if it holds up.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2023 5:23 PM Title: Day 2 - Growth Spurt
Okay, you are definitely being way too hard on yourself, your writing is quite good considering what you said! The interaction between the two is amazing, I love the focus on the comparisons, and including the measurements is a really nice touch! <3
Though, I feel like things are about to get much, much worse for Tom... Can't wait to see more from you!
Author's Response:
Thanks Cara! More comparisons to come. Hope to hear more from you as the story grows. :)
[Report This]Date: December 16 2023 4:05 PM Title: Day 2 - Growth Spurt
A intriguing start for sure, straight to action, love the smugness and teasing attitude of Meg.
Definitely looking forward to see more actions as she grow bigger!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review, I’m excited for her to get bigger, too. Coming soon.