Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

Knowing what I do about Amanda's dietary tastes, the suspense is fantastic.
Your imagery and punctuation is gaining quality in leaps and bounds. This story has me gripping my mouse to see the next bit each time...

Author's Response:

Thank you Timescribe you know me to well, i'm not sure yet how far i shall take this the ideas are flowing in so many directions that its difficult to choose the right path,i shall leave a trail of mysteries to confuse the readers mind...change its direction to and fro until an ending has been found,take care xx.

Amanda.