Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2009 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

I think this is your first multi-chapter piece, and I'm glad you continued it as chapter one left some suspenseful unanswered questions.
Going after innocent Matthew sounds like a sexy sequel too....

Author's Response:

Mathew is going to be memorable i hope,it may still leave the reader perplexed i'm afraid...not sure which way my feelings will direct me yet.Thank you for taking time to read and review chapter 2 xx.

Amanda.