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Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2024 4:18 PM Title: Even Bigger Girls

Nice, I wish we had girls' Mothers too, Moms have grown to 20 feet tall, and we would have great family scenes.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2024 12:11 PM Title: Lucky in Love

Great job. I hope you have more stories like this up your sleeve. 

Thank you 

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2024 12:11 PM Title: Lucky in Love

Great job. I hope you have more stories like this up your sleeve. 

Thank you 



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Thanks for the reviews! I should have some more mini-gts in the future

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2024 12:11 PM Title: Lucky in Love

Great job. I hope you have more stories like this up your sleeve. 

Thank you 

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2024 7:34 AM Title: The Casket of Sota and Kaoru

Awesome. Thank you very much. The girls where very tall but not to overly tall. Something you could actually live with. Keep it up 

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2024 11:24 PM Title: The Casket of Sota and Kaoru

Thank you for putting this chapter out there. I don't know if the manga will ever be concluded or not; I get the feeling that it's gonna remain in perpetual limbo, but that's just my two cents. Anyways, it was nice to see a chapter where Sota and Kaoru work out the sexual angst between the two of them, given their subconscious feelings for one another in the original manga. It was nice to have a hypothetical "what if you're not related" scenario where Kaoru finally has the green light to do what she's wanted to do for quite some time.

I've enjoyed every chapter of this story so far, but this chapter held a particular place for me, since Kaoru always seemed to kind of give off "favorite girl" vibes from Sota's point of view, at least on a subconsciously repressed level, even though he had crush on Ayano, dated Shizuku first, and appeared somewhat committed to being with Sanae for a while. I know the incest angle adds a strong sense of taboo to the whole mix (which some might find kinky), so I wondered on some way that hurdle could be overcome in this fanfiction, and you've delivered on that hypothetical splendidly.

This whole read has been enjoyable for me (for somewhat obvious reasons), and I'm hoping for more in the future. I just wanted to put this review out there to show my appreciation, both for this particular chapter and for the work as a whole.



Author's Response:

I meant to have it up earlier, but the site went down for maintenance haha. Anyways I'm glad you've been enjoying it. I share your pessimism about the manga's continuation, that just seems to be the way these things go, which is too bad because it seemed like it was building up to a conclusion of sorts. Anyways thanks again!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2024 8:22 AM Title: An Arrested Development with Kaoru

Another good chapter. Keep it up 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2024 6:41 AM Title: A Night Dancing with Momomi

Not bad keep it up.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2024 5:08 AM Title: A Night Dancing with Momomi

Not bad keep it up.

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2024 2:28 PM Title: A Ski Trip with Ruri

I like the story so far. Keep it up 

Reviewer: theharper Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2024 10:19 PM Title: Suzuna's Tournament

This was a fun one. Keep it up. And thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you! The volleyball team isn't done yet!

Reviewer: acuteoblique Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2023 3:17 PM Title: A Convention with Sakura

Loved hiding him in her costume!

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2023 11:44 PM Title: Another Date with Ayano

Very cool!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: klinza Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2023 3:41 AM Title: Another Date with Ayano

all the way through did you think about putting melon were all apes and he's driving us bananas all in one story i couldn't even read anymore after that. are you going to put a warning or do you just openly not like those kinds of people, i mean fruits and animals.  

Author's Response:

No offense is meant to anyone, it's a reference to the Planet of the Apes film.

Reviewer: King Offjer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2023 6:45 PM Title: Even Bigger Girls

I liked that manga a lot too. I’ve actually never found the English translated version. So I’m not sure how well you captured the characters, but as a stand alone this slaps. Nice work, Green.



Author's Response:

Thanks! This one should have one chapter for each girl.

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