Date: October 28 2023 12:58 PM Title: Prologue
Hey Bob
I was wondering if you are still writing the “stranded” story because it been a while since the first chapter and I also wanted to check if you are okay and what the schedule looks like for the release of chapters
sorry if this sounds like I’m trying too rush you but I just wanted to check in with you
thanks
[Report This]Date: September 26 2023 6:23 PM Title: Prologue
Hi BobGreen,
Thanks for the great start to this exciting story. I have read it a few times already.
I love the way you portray the individual perspectives of the characters. It makes it easy to get into their feelings and thoughts.
My favorite part is the relationship between the mother and daughter and their power play. When the daughter talks about the open shoes and her mother mentiones her stinky feet having a great impact on the tiny ones, it creates this great power relationship of giantess mother and daughter compared to the tiny ones, which I find very exciting.
Please more of these mother daughter, tiny, conversations and actions!
Keep it up ;)
[Report This]Date: September 19 2023 2:27 AM Title: Prologue
A very good start for this story and the characters so far are very interesting and I can’t wait to see how they end up stranded and will work together
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story I've written. Also very happy to hear you enjoy the characters. Even though Gail is the Gulliverian like us(or at least... I assume you're normal sized lol), I've made Benn to be the main lens because I do find the 'ant watching a god' perspective much more interesting than 'gods watching ants'. Hope you look forward to seeing them getting stranded next week!