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Reviewer: Gadgetman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2009 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sentences such as " GT-GOD AND BESS IS A GTS-GODDESS" and talk about other simensions and such in some of your other stories...try explaining them IN your story or include a word key at the beginning

Reviewer: Gadgetman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2009 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man you have a weird mythology that you dont explain in your stories...Terms that I have no knoledge of appear left and right in this, perhaps you should take time to explain them what they mean.

Author's Response:

i admit some of terms used in my stories are strange and confusing. Can you give some examples of terms in this story you don't understand?

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