Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2024 9:22 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem

Glad to see this story's back again! He ended up getting discovered after all like I guessed once, but I never thought he'd be seen by all of Molly's friends at once. Looking forward to whatever happens next.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Back when this story was only going to be 7 chapters long, I had planned on only Chaz discovering him, and he'd be assigned as the other person allowed to know about Ren, but as the scope of this story expanded, I decided that was too obvious a route to go, and also I need everyone to know about him for some fun plans I have in store ;) 

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2023 7:51 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem

I really love this story. I love Petra is an Evanescence fan too! Maybe Molly and Ren can have fun at Sleeping Molly’s big feet as sprites maybe inside her own sneakers while she’s a sprite with her feet inside the shoes? Footception lol

Author's Response:

Thank you! I don't know why, but an angel being an Evanescence fan just made sense to me lol. I think I might write some shrunken Molly and Ren doing things on bigger sleeping Molly, but I'm not sure what yet. There will most likely be more general foot stuff at least.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2023 7:43 PM Title: Ch 1. Requiem

I hadn't discovered this story yet, since it was on hiatus for a while but I got to catch up now and it's been a really nice heartwarming story.

I might be entirely off the mark but I have a feeling that he'll be discovered by one of the friends, but since he never picked a second person he might get out of being sent back to heaven by assigning them, just a theory.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I plan on getting the next chapter up a lot sooner than this one took lol.

I won't spoil anything, but I'll just say that you aren't entirely off the mark

Reviewer: MicroThaumaturge Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 1:53 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem

I missed that you uploaded multiple chapters, so I deleted my initial review and am reframing it.

You started us off with a cliffhanger chapter.  How delightfully cruel of you.

Congrats on another strong start.  You've got me hooked, and I'll be continuing this when I can eke out some more "free" time.

The premise is interesting.  I'm definitely getting "The Good Place" vibes, which I count as a good thing.  I'm curious to see how Renton's new size impacts the story.  I tend to find that below 4-6 inches, a tiny's direct influence on the outcome of a story quickly dwindles as their lack of size translates to a lack of agency.  I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how our deserving returnee gets along with his titanic saint of a wife.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Sorry my slow upload speed got the best of you lol

I tend to fear starting a story with a cliffhanger because I don't want my audience to think I'm pulling a fast one on them, but I don't mind it so much when the next chapter's already up. 

I've only seen the first episode of "The Good Place" a couple years ago, but I even that little bit definitely had its influence on this story. The afterlife is something that will forever intrigue me as I feel it sort represents our ideals as people, like what is paradise to us and how would we want to spend eternity. For a size fetishist, shrunken with a bunch of hot giant angels is probably pretty paradisaical.