[Report This]Date: March 05 2024 9:22 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
Glad to see this story's back again! He ended up getting discovered after all like I guessed once, but I never thought he'd be seen by all of Molly's friends at once. Looking forward to whatever happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Back when this story was only going to be 7 chapters long, I had planned on only Chaz discovering him, and he'd be assigned as the other person allowed to know about Ren, but as the scope of this story expanded, I decided that was too obvious a route to go, and also I need everyone to know about him for some fun plans I have in store ;)
[Report This]Date: January 15 2024 12:59 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
Sweet story, really liked the whole afterlife aspect on it and the detail you gave to it. Really enjoy having Ren and Molly as characters.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Ren and Molly have been a joy to write, as well as creating the rules to this setting's afterlife.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 6:20 AM Title: Ch 9. Living the Dream
Giantess rampage in an angel-guided RP dreamscape, a ton of wonderful sizey references, a full-on macrophilic confession, and a same-size sexual roleplay session with divinely sourced gummy bears adding sensation to the participants: each of these would have made for a great chapter. Together? Giant-scale magic.
This was an absolutely wonderful chapter, my kudos to you on several counts. I'm also glad to see Lindsay got the man she's been lusting after, and Chaz found someone to pursue, who wants to be with him, and with whom he can be himself. Thanks so much for your continued contributions to the community!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! This chapter's unlike anything I've written before in quite a few ways, so I'm relieved that it came out okay. And thanks again for the help on this one; it definitely made the chapter way better than what I originally had.
Date: December 13 2023 3:56 PM Title: Ch 8. From His Perspective
Loved them both being swallowed as sprites. Although it kind of makes me want to see a chapter where Molly and Ren are both sprites and Petra has to go do something, and while she does they end up unaware swallowed by someone else.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm not sure if this story will end up having anything like that, but there might be more vore stuff in the future. I'm kind of playing a lot of the size interactions by ear on this one.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2023 7:51 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
I really love this story. I love Petra is an Evanescence fan too! Maybe Molly and Ren can have fun at Sleeping Molly’s big feet as sprites maybe inside her own sneakers while she’s a sprite with her feet inside the shoes? Footception lol
Author's Response:
Thank you! I don't know why, but an angel being an Evanescence fan just made sense to me lol. I think I might write some shrunken Molly and Ren doing things on bigger sleeping Molly, but I'm not sure what yet. There will most likely be more general foot stuff at least.
[Report This]Date: December 11 2023 9:34 PM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
I'm completely hooked! Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2023 7:43 PM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
I hadn't discovered this story yet, since it was on hiatus for a while but I got to catch up now and it's been a really nice heartwarming story.
I might be entirely off the mark but I have a feeling that he'll be discovered by one of the friends, but since he never picked a second person he might get out of being sent back to heaven by assigning them, just a theory.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I plan on getting the next chapter up a lot sooner than this one took lol.
I won't spoil anything, but I'll just say that you aren't entirely off the mark
[Report This]Date: November 12 2023 2:40 AM Title: Ch 6. Two and One Hundredthsome
I adore this story and hope an update soon. Thought really I adore all your stuff!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I do feel bad for the long hiatus on this one, but I wanted to focus on Stranded with the Enemy which I started first. Once that story is done (which will be soon, before the end of the month), I'll return to this one.
Date: October 10 2023 12:43 PM Title: Ch 6. Two and One Hundredthsome
Very nice fetish stuff this chapter. Would love to see more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I plan to add more eventually.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2023 12:22 PM Title: Ch 4. Tell Me It's Real
Very nice conclusion to the whole unaware arc. Pretty funny that a simple misunderstanding on the whole rules test thing lead to a bit of misinformation from the guardian angel.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I liked the idea of an immortal, semi-omniscient entity also being kind of a ditz, so I'm glad to see that element enjoyed.
Date: October 01 2023 12:05 PM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
This is really nice set up for a story. I’m excited to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2023 5:36 PM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit
This is one of my favorite stories on the site thus far. Its so good, both the romance and the sexy stuff. I really hope we get way more of this. Also since we are introducing spells, maybe have a temporary invisibility spell so that there can be some unaware content, maybe even with some characters other than Molly.
Also, maybe do a “Meaningful Life”-type thing where he overhears conversations of people who he thought didn’t like him or undervalued him, where they posthumously realize his value. Idk if it would work in your story but it seems like it could be a cool side angle.
Author's Response:
Thank you! My original plan was to have two more chapters (for a total of seven), but it's possible those get split into 1-2 more depending on how long they end up being. I don't want to include something like invisibility because that would diminish the threat of being discovered, thus making the story less interesting by eliminating the few stakes it has. Your other idea is neat, but I don't have any plans on writing something like that.
Date: September 07 2023 3:57 PM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit
Amazing story. I love a gentle and loving narrative.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Me too.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2023 10:35 AM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit
I'm loving what you've done with this story, and I ca't wait to see where it goes next, though I'm getting the inkling it will be somewhere both sweet and sexy, and I'm all for it.
I'm pleased with how you've developed Renton throughout these chapters. It reinforces him as a good, but still human(ish) man. The small size has been both the expected challenge, and a constant driver for the plot progression, as it should be, but I'm pleased to see it hasn't entirely robbed him of agency. Even if most of the events are acting upon him, his indestructibility allows his persostence to shine through in key ways, and the occasional presence of a dedicated, if selectively reserved full-size angel butler helps him act through her.
I'm loving that even in acting as an agent for Renton, Petra is also playing her own game, and she does so with a deftness that speaks to a significant amout of prior experience. If her short term goals are what they seem, I sincerely hope she is successful.
I can't end this without giving kudos to Molly's character. The woman is dedicated, loyal, driven, and most importantly, loving beyond the pale, and I avsolutely love her character for that. I'm also loving her more devious and assertive side.
So far everyone and everything is engaging, enticing, and a balm for the heart. Thanks again for writing this. I can't wait to see how it ends!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! If you'll take a peek into my crystal ball, you shall see that the future is assuredly sexy and sweet (and perhaps a bit more).
Making tinies in these stories interesting characters in their own right is what I believe to be a necessary challenge. Obviously, everyone (including myself) is here for the giantess, and it's easy to get lost in detailing the character of our desires, but neglecting the smaller half of the story often leads to a lesser narrative (especially in gentle stories where tinies aren't dying in droves). It's hard because, as you've said, at that size a lot of things are happening to him without him being able to do much to others, so agency becomes difficult to maintain. I like to focus in on their personality, inner thoughts/reactions, and on what they are capable of doing to maintain the tinies' presence and agency in the story, which I'm glad can be seen in Ren here.
Petra's a lot of fun. She was the first character I came up with for this story, and writing her has been a blast. I'm glad Molly's character landed too.
[Report This]Date: September 06 2023 4:16 AM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit
I adore this story! It's such a cute and interesting take on this genre. Did you get any inspiration from The Good Place?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've only seen the first episode of The Good Place a few years back, but I do think that little bit of exposure left an impression. I remember the main character waking up in an office and the guy explaining how the afterlife works and how it doesn't quite line up with any real world religion; that influence can certainly be seen in the first chapter. I've been fascinated with the afterlife for a long time, so I like to think up ways it could/should (or really, how I'd like it to) work, so for this story, I took some of those ideas and added a giantess spin to them. Glad you enjoy it!
Date: September 05 2023 8:28 PM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit
Loving this series! Can’t wait to see the next chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope to have the next one done in a couple weeks or so.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2023 2:36 AM Title: Ch 5. Together in Body and Spirit
This is a cute little story, I like the premise and the whole secret tiny aspect brings another level of intimacy to the whole thing. Afterlife as a sprite doesn't sound too terrible if you ask me!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm a sucker for hiding tinies in clothes, and it certainly adds a fun wrinkle to the story. Hopefully the actual afterlife can be so nice!
[Report This]Date: September 05 2023 1:53 AM Title: Ch 1. Requiem
I missed that you uploaded multiple chapters, so I deleted my initial review and am reframing it.
You started us off with a cliffhanger chapter. How delightfully cruel of you.
Congrats on another strong start. You've got me hooked, and I'll be continuing this when I can eke out some more "free" time.
The premise is interesting. I'm definitely getting "The Good Place" vibes, which I count as a good thing. I'm curious to see how Renton's new size impacts the story. I tend to find that below 4-6 inches, a tiny's direct influence on the outcome of a story quickly dwindles as their lack of size translates to a lack of agency. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how our deserving returnee gets along with his titanic saint of a wife.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sorry my slow upload speed got the best of you lol
I tend to fear starting a story with a cliffhanger because I don't want my audience to think I'm pulling a fast one on them, but I don't mind it so much when the next chapter's already up.
I've only seen the first episode of "The Good Place" a couple years ago, but I even that little bit definitely had its influence on this story. The afterlife is something that will forever intrigue me as I feel it sort represents our ideals as people, like what is paradise to us and how would we want to spend eternity. For a size fetishist, shrunken with a bunch of hot giant angels is probably pretty paradisaical.