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Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow! have to say, I loved it totally! thank you. :)

Author's Response:

What a curious pen name you have chosen i must admit the thought of you as my chocolate bar is appealling hehe...i wonder what you are hiding in the dark corners of your mind hidden behind closed doors in small compartments waiting for a word or a gesture to bring them back to the surface..


Let me know when you would like me to unwrap your outer layer so that i can indulge myself on the sweet chocolate hiding inside mmm ...


Amanda xxx

Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very imaginative, well ordered story.  The writing was a bit rough but, extremely colorful and illustrative.

Author's Response:

Thank you Vito,its been soo long since i wrote any thing worth while,i am desolate my hearts iced over i,m afraid.

Amanda xx

Reviewer: kongoboy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow Amanda Light of my Life! You are the best author and writter I Know! and I was wondering, If I could commission you to write me a very customized and personal story, and If so I would email or talk to you about my fantisy would be to be able to talk to you via cell phone after being devoured by a sexy Godess like you Amanda,Im David by the way we have exchanged a couple emails before. But please also call me if You can or care to @ 773-991-2696 and My email is Thank's Amanda!


Author's Response:

Hello i am not writing for this forum at the moment.

Ii have some personal stuff which is dominating my life at the moment,i will consider your request but it may be quite some time before i respond again.Take care Amanda.

Reviewer: oishi1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I particularly liked the rose bush trap and how calm the predator was.

Author's Response:

Yes i am a very calm person by nature,although i do have a dark side so be carefull.


Reviewer: Vito Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2009 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great read, this author is good.

Author's Response:

Your words give me the strength to continue for this i thank you xx.


Reviewer: daniel222 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2009 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi Amanda 

Wow, just love your story. really like the way you write.

this story is my fantasy, are you sure that this is not based on a true story ? :)

Author's Response:

Thank you Daniel you are a new member aren't you?   welcome to the forum i hope you enjoy reading these wonderfull stories as much as i have.


Reviewer: AGrader Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2009 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is so hot as scary as it is a part of me would like to have been Peter

Author's Response:

Thank you Agrader i am so glad you enjoyed it, i hope it pressed all the right buttons for you,i would love it if you wanted to replace Peter i can assure you the ending would be the same.


Reviewer: Tiny Brandon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2009 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very descriptive story I wish I was that little man I loved this one 1 of my favorites

Author's Response:

Hello once again,so you liked this tale did you i think my next yarn will also become a favorite.

Thank you Tinybrandon.


Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2009 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is breathtaking. The detailed garden description, the rose pruning chase scene, the mouth play, the advanced knowledge Amanda had of every part of her childhood picnic area... All these elements add to an original and captivating story.
A pity Peter is no more, or we could have a sequel to this masterpiece.
Maybe someone could time travel back and teleport him out of her stomach, seconds before he'd otherwise die, without Amanda knowing. But later, she'd find him again, and question him for the truth, and eat him again.

Author's Response:

Mmmm interes.ting scenario....nah i prefer Peter where he is inside her stomach soon to be her poo haha,yhank you for your kind remarks Timescribe i am so glad you enjoyed it.I look forward to your next tale.


Reviewer: slaveshahzad Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2009 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

MADAM i am wataing here to become your next victum
i think when you are ready for next meal call me

MADAM very very nice story that lucky guy gets for why he

was in this world



Author's Response:

Thank you maybe you'll end up inside her one day.


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