Date: August 12 2023 7:17 PM Title: 01. A new friend
That--was hot. Wow. Great story. I always feel a bit guilty when I enjoy a fatal vore story, but I love the dynamic between Bruna and Mia. Their openness and instant connection would typically have me calling bulls---, but with the intensity of the situation, the passion each had for vore - I can believe they hooked up after that. Props to Mia's character for her courage. Also, the sexy times at the end was much appreciated. I'm looking forward to what you come up with next.
Wow, thanks for such high praise! Writing the dynamics between Bruna and Mia in a short, single-shot story was indeed a challenge, but I'm happy the result isn't 'that bad' lol.
Well, this story is a single-chapter one, so probably will have no continuation, but you can read my other stories and see if some of them fits your taste :)
Date: July 18 2023 6:17 AM Title: 01. A new friend
Cute story! I love it when some tinies are friend and others are food.
Thanks! I also liked the dynamic between Bruna and Mia, and who knows
what more adventures these two will have together? By the way, this
story is strongly based on suggestions and on some favorite scenarios of
a friend I have, with some parts written by her, so maybe you would
like to check her own stories too: look on DeviantArt for Misty064 (I
don't know if I can post hyperlinks here, so I'll just show her
DeviantArt pen name
Date: July 15 2023 1:58 AM Title: 01. A new friend
This is really good, and I liked how much you described vore from an outside perspective. Like, the other tinies seeing imprints of Ishiro's hands and feet as he pushes against Bruna's cheeks (the whole scene of him being eaten was awesome btw). And Mia feeling the tinies go down outside Bruna's throat and listening to them scream outside her belly, it's interesting getting a voyeur's perspective on vore. Overall, just love the dynamic between Bruna and Mia.
Thank you :) It's indeed rare to have stories, I guess, with outside perspective, I am myself a fan of endo so I most write about the inside, but maybe I should focus on outside feelings too? Seems interesting :D
Date: July 13 2023 9:35 AM Title: 01. A new friend
Another one?! All that comes to mind is the meme with the cat furiously typing away at the PC lol
I can say I enjoy gentle more than cruel, but this was so delicious! The way Bruna just LOVES swallowing tinies and how both her and Mia are so into it... it pushes all my buttons!
This story feels very well written and there are very few grammatical or spelling mistakes. It's very polished which is great!
Thank you again for an awesome story <3
Wow, I was about to turn to resume getting ready for my routine morning jog aaaaand... GMail notified me a new e-mail has come... a new review... wow, had to sit back and read!
This story was written
for more than a month, actually, it was just waiting for its time to be
published. I wanted to post some gentle stuff first...^^"
you for enjoying this story! This one, as I said in the Chapter Notes,
has some parts written by the Discord user Grafitte, known in Deviantart
as Misty064, so I can say it's sort of a colab and, also, a story I
wrote for her. She writes very good stories too, check them out!