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Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2023 12:58 AM Title: Part 1

Every day I don't see this story updated in Most Recent is a sad day indeed. As I would hate to see this story fall into the fate of so many and be silently discontinued here is a review. I apologize in advance as this is not as thorough as my usual reviews (which is why I had refrained from reviewing yet).

This story so far is fantastic. You immediately hooked me with the concept (essentially the idea of a sleepwalking giantess. It's just not done often) but mostly with the descriptions. It is very, very rare to see a story like this, of this rampage genre, told from the perspective of those underfoot as it were. As such I very much appreciate that this story gives a very much needed viewpoint shift and we get to see from the perspective of those below.


In concert with that the imagery used to describe the giantess and the encounter with her are stark and vivid, spectacular descriptions that go above and beyond, not only making this a narrative worth getting invested in but something sensual and beautiful to be observed (Excuse me if I became overly poetic).

The last two chapters in contrast left some to be desired with their brevity and lack of much, but I take that more as a lack of reviews censoring motivation than a fault of the story or writer therein.

For now, I am watching this story with great anticipation and hope it lives up what it has set out for in the first chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi thank you for your detailed feedback, apologies I didn't reply to your post, I somehow missed it! I'm glad that you have enjoyed the story, I'm sorry you haven't been as impressed with the next few chapters, admittedly yes the lack of reviews / amount of reviews does and can have a bearing on how much I post, as with everything in life nothing comes for free and I feel that too many people expect everything for free at top quality without either any financial investment or time investment.

So, thank you for the time you have taken to review my work and give me feedback, which I greatly appreciate. Hope you check in and enjoy my work and/or follow me on subscribestar, you never know I might find myself motivated to finish the story :-)

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