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Reviewer: Javert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2023 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Heading Home

Shouldn't this be MISDV instead of MSIDV?



Author's Response: Ah a typo, good spot, thanks!

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2023 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Heading Home

I hope Sophie will have attitude of a bigger person and try to understand and comfort her man. Maybe she can be gentle with other captives and make him envious? That would be funny.

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2023 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Heading Home

Enjoying the story. Interesting world setup in the first chapter - gives you lots of options to play with.  I'll rate once the story concludes, but well written thus far.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback, I hope you enjoy wherever this leads!

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2023 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Heading Home

Damn looks good so far, hope the girlfriend stays gentle and doesn’t kill him tho like the usual cliches. Would be a nice change of pace 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback! No idea where the story is going yet, but hope you like where it heads

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