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Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2023 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Margaret

Pretty good ‘conclusion’ to the ‘into’. 

Idea pretty much have been given.

Only two that I could add: someone is shrunk and then also told that they are extremely malleable but durable, that way they can be used without injury as an insole. The other is seeing the true limits of this therapy, even more so then telling specific sizes, (considering it can somehow change Hair) see if they can change it to more unnatural colour (someone who dons’t want to use dye and want it to grow that way), have particular patterns on the skin. Then how far limbs can be modified and if new in could be grown, cause some people would absolutely like to have cat ears or tails, and the other related animal traits. Extreme, but needs testing. 

Thought on further thought, and lightly less extreme, can senses be enhanced and his far. Cause human hear is already so food that only a few weeks and someone could actually hear all air moving in a room. So enhancement to eyesight to get more wavelengths might also be usfull. Possibly even to Clara.




Author's Response: Thanks. Glad that it was well received. I can see some of those idea in the future. The different hair colors into a non natural one. The cat ears and tail, or other animal parts, would be hard. There are specific people that it would work on, like a vet who knows the intricacies of an animal. The increase in senses is very likely. I could see Clara making someone very small and the person caring for that person will need better hearing or sight to find a person that is very small. The malleable and durable is the hardest. It would be literally getting rid of all the bones in a person and then making the skin unbreakable to hold everything inside. She could definitely make all the organs malleable. It's just the bones that make it hard.

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2023 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Margaret

Excited to see where this story goes, especially if Clara can make some one smaller.



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. That is what happens in the next chapter.

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